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Tried to concentrate more on composition with this one. what do people think??

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:5 Jan 2012 - 11:44 PM
Focal Length:45mm
Aperture:f/5.0
Shutter Speed:6sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Venus & the waxing Moon
Username:SiPickles SiPickles
Uploaded:6 Jan 2012 - 12:12 AM
Tags:Black & white, General, Landscape / travel, Specialist / abstract, Wildlife / nature
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Jocelia
Jocelia e2 Member 3Jocelia vcard Australia1 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 12:44 AM

"The moon was a ghostly gallion tossed upon cloudy seas". Good one…….Jocelia….

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SiPickles
SiPickles  2 England
6 Jan 2012 - 4:18 AM

I got a meteor trail in the next frame. Apparently its been really good for them in the UK last few days. Only spotted it while editing. Can only upload one a day tho!!! Thanks for commenting.

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8748 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1575 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 4:40 PM

You are building up quite an eclectic portfolio, Simon. I suppose this would be of interest to astronomers or the like, but I know very little about this wonderful subject, even though I once went to classes on it. So I will deal more with your composition. I like the way you have chosen the silhouetted tree to set off your subjects, and the aura around the moon. The format is probably the best one you could have chosen. The moon is nicely placed in top top right of the frame, but you might consider cropping a bit from the bottom in order to bring the elements together more. There isn't much more I can say.
Pamela.

Last Modified By pamelajean at 6 Jan 2012 - 4:42 PM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 8:03 PM

What to say. This is very specialist and I have no doubt it does what you wanted. The problem for general viewing is that specialist nature.

paul

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