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Shot from inside Tate Modern. From a b/w negative. No tricks. Probably a bit soft and quality not that good. But I just love this building.

Title:Tate Modern #1
Username:SlowSong SlowSong
Uploaded:11 Aug 2008 - 10:24 PM
Tags:Architecture, Art, Black & white, Gallery, General, London, Modern, Mono, Tate
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rontear
rontear e2 Member 11rontear vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
11 Aug 2008 - 11:19 PM

Strong composition. mono has given this the reportage touch Chris. Crisp image. Ron.

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CathR
CathR  7139 forum posts United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
12 Aug 2008 - 11:22 AM

What I like here is the contrast between the tight space on the left and the cavernous space on the right. The girder holds the left side of the image well and the figures look constrained within the space. By contrast the woman with the pushchair is gazing out into acres of empty space. Good composition and good tonal range. Just a niggle - I feel it is a pity the figure on the right is chopped in half.

Catherine

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SlowSong e2 Member 64431 forum postsSlowSong vcard England29 Constructive Critique Points
12 Aug 2008 - 12:01 PM

Thanks Catherine. Perhaps I'll clone the figure out altogether. I had to crop the image to straighten it up, and unfortunately this poor sole got the chop too. Posting another one later from slightly different angle with a hint of colour. Would appreciate comments on that too please.

Many thanks.
Chris

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