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What do you guys think this is, and how well did i do it in these conditions?
Ok I will tell you. hehe. My boyfriend and I were washing my car (him outside, me inside) when i spotted this. This was taken inside my Kia Picanto. This is the sunroof with water droplets on. I jumped out stopping him from changing this pattern, ran into the house, got my camera and this was the result. What are your opinions? This was edited in photoshop and converted into black and white. (Macro filters used)

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 600D
Lens:EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS II
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:14 Jul 2013 - 2:51 PM
Focal Length:30mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.4
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/30sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Bubbles 1
Username:Sone Sone
Uploaded:14 Jul 2013 - 6:30 PM
Tags:Black and white, Close-up / macro
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2796 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jul 2013 - 6:49 PM

The very first interesting shot I EVER took was with a small Fuji compact, and it was of raindrops on the sun-roof of a VW Golf from the inside!


I think it looks good. Very abstract. Since its b&w, I think a little more W and less grey might work, soIve loaded 2 mods, - mod 2 is an inversion which look like something you could play with.


regards


Willie

Last Modified By banehawi at 14 Jul 2013 - 6:55 PM

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DicksPics
DicksPics e2 Member 3DicksPics vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jul 2013 - 7:20 PM

A super abstract which had to be taken when you did!
I just love this type of shot!SmileSmile

Richard

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Philpot
Philpot e2 Member 2Philpot vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jul 2013 - 9:42 PM

superb image, your lucky it didn't evaporate in this heat at the moment!

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pamelajean Critique Team 8752 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1577 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2013 - 6:26 PM

I get the feeling that you are pleased with this, and you have a right to be so. Well done for seeing the potential and capturing it with such clarity.
The patterns are interesting, with all those different sized circles, and the largest one is very nicely placed.
With an abstract like this, there is a lot of scope for using your creativity, especially with colour.
Pamela.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2013 - 8:59 PM

This is a clean sharp image, well seen. I would, like Willie, up the contrast a bit to increase the various tones of grey.

Paul

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