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Taken with macro filters by a window. Some editing done on PS Touch.

Camera:Canon EOS 600D
Lens:EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Nov 2013 - 1:27 PM
Lens Max Aperture:f/5
Shutter Speed:1/20sec
ISO:100
Metering Mode:Pattern
Flash:Off, did not fire.
Title:Heart Ring
Username:Sone Sone
Uploaded:29 Nov 2013 - 6:17 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, General
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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7435 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1022 Constructive Critique Points
29 Nov 2013 - 8:12 AM

Very attractive, and very precisely, carefully taken.

Just a bit more brightness would make the stones sparkle.
Moira

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
29 Nov 2013 - 12:49 PM

Brighter, and if you sharpen more it will sparkle. Taking a shot of something bright, on a white background will tend to underexpose unless you use +1 exposure compensation.


Also loaded a mod.



regards


Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
29 Nov 2013 - 2:11 PM

Good try but flat and needs more depth of field. F11 or 16 and a bright light source suitably placed to make the stones sparkle, as they should. Side light or, if the ring has no back, a backlight through the stones. The smaller the aperture, the more likely you are to get a bright catchlight and star effect.

Paul

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Fefe e2 Member 2Fefe vcard United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
29 Nov 2013 - 2:25 PM

I have done a mod for you too.... I adjusted the levels in all colour channels, did a little in Shadow/highlights. then selective colour. Added some luminence in match colour and increased the colour intensity. and gave it a smart sharpen. I was hoping it would bring out the colours in the diamonds.
Diane

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