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Taken with macro filters. Some editing done on photoshop touch. Just a strawberry on a glass, tried something new and tried to fix it a bit with editing it. Maybe my set up was wrong but i was so excited to trie this hehe, any improvement ideas or comments ??

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:6 Aug 2013 - 3:28 PM
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:10"sec
ISO:800
Flash:Off, did not fire.
Title:Strawberry 2
Username:Sone Sone
Uploaded:6 Sep 2013 - 2:06 PM
Tags:Black & white, Close-up / macro, General
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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
6 Sep 2013 - 4:27 PM

Really not sure what you intend here. Very black, very white, not very strawberry, I fear.

Paul

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chase
chase Critique Team 91118 forum postschase vcard England240 Constructive Critique Points
7 Sep 2013 - 8:28 AM

I think you needed just a wee bit more light here so the subject could actually be seen as a Strawberry.Nice idea but the very long shutter speed has given you lots of noise which,given the darkness of this image,has not done you any favours picking out the subject from the bg.
Try using a small torch,easily used handheld so you can move the light exactly where you need it,that way you will be able to reduce your exposure time.
More exif data would have been helpful & a little info on how you lit this.

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