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a sunset near the peir in hunstanton. I used my mum's camera for this one

Camera:HP Photosmart 435
Lens:6.0-18.0mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:coastal sunset
Username:spanner99 spanner99
Uploaded:17 Aug 2007 - 11:52 AM
Tags:Hunstanton, Landscape / travel
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84277 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
17 Aug 2007 - 11:59 AM

Gorgeous!! The colours are wonderful and I like the reflection in the sea. You've even managed to find some foreground interest. I can image this shot having a third taken off both left and right, so you are left with just the middle bit - beautifully framed and on the wall. Brilliant!!

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crimp
crimp  7 England
17 Aug 2007 - 12:01 PM

Cracking sunset, nice one!
Kelly

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martinduke
martinduke  1037 forum posts England
17 Aug 2007 - 12:08 PM

Nice sunset. I would have framed up the sun to top right or left and maybe stand infront of an interesting building so you get a nice sillo.
It just needs a bit more for me.
Nice image though and you get a click from me.
Martin

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John_Frid
John_Frid  8514 forum posts United Kingdom56 Constructive Critique Points
17 Aug 2007 - 1:34 PM

Nicely exposed image with gorgeous colours.

Where improvement can come is in the composition. You have managed to put the horizon off of the horizontal centre line, which is good, but does sit on the vertical centre line. A good general rule of composition is to place the main points of interest on the thirds (i.e. a third of the way in from the edge and a third up from the bottom or down from the top).

The other thing that would create impact is something reasonably substantial in the foreground.

However, sunsets are tricky subjects and you have exposed this very nicely.

John

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imander
imander  7388 forum posts United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
17 Aug 2007 - 4:42 PM

very well done,beautiful capture
ian

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MrsS
MrsS  84527 forum posts England18 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2007 - 10:19 AM

Wish I could vote for this one, Steph Smile

Gr8 reflections ahd I really like the way you've kept the channel marker in to give it scale Smile

Cheers!

Fran x

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