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Photo of my beautiful niece - looks can be so deceiving - she is a very determined little girl, yet looks as though shes so meek and mild!

Camera:Canon PowerShot A620
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:INNOCENCE
Username:SPOTON SPOTON
Uploaded:28 Jul 2008 - 7:46 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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fatherpie
28 Jul 2008 - 7:50 PM
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Fascinating age, mine are all a lot older now. Great portrait, love the expression and the catch lights in the eyes really lift the whole shot.
Dave

Last Modified By fatherpie at 28 Jul 2008 - 7:51 PM
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colin
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28 Jul 2008 - 8:24 PM
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Beautiful shot of a lovely wee girl. She'll break some hearts when she's older. I like the lighting and her eyes cast upwards. Very sweet image.
Colin

EDIT: Should also say, Welcome to EPZ Smile

Last Modified By colin at 28 Jul 2008 - 8:25 PM
banehawi
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28 Jul 2008 - 8:34 PM
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Its a beautiful expression, angelic, and a nice soft presentation.

A couple of comments:

Portraits work better generally with the subject looking at the lens, though as with this shot, shooting quickly for the moment sometimes doesnt allow for a pose.

It benefits from a little curves/levels adjustment which brightens the image overall.

The colour for me is a little too saturated. A closer crop, removing some of the shirt area can also be worth a try.

Have uploaded 2 mods with these suggestions applied.

Hope this helps


PS, - uploaded the wrong file for one of them, its the original.

Willie

Last Modified By banehawi at 28 Jul 2008 - 8:39 PM
lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx (e2 Member)
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28 Jul 2008 - 10:40 PM
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The eyes are so important and they are great here

johnjrp
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29 Jul 2008 - 3:09 AM
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Lovely image and so sweet. Added a mod. John

bajanexile
29 Jul 2008 - 7:23 PM
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Nice image. Unlike one of the other comments, I like the bright saturated view of life (Like good old Kodachrome Colour Transparency Film). Next time, change the Menu in the camera to Aperture Priority and use a setting of f/5.6 on the extended part of the Zoom. You should get razor sharp eyes with a progressive drop off in sharpness as you go back towards the ears. The eyes are a window to the soul. Regards. Bajanexile

Beautiful portrait! I like the angelic expression, whether intentional or not.

Ridgeway
3 Aug 2008 - 4:44 AM
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Lovelty job, and welcome.

SPOTON
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South Africa
3 Aug 2008 - 8:52 AM
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Thank you once again!!! Look forward to seeing more of your pics too! Love, Mandi

Her eyes are gorgeous.Nice that she is looking away, gives it a feel of not being too posed. Trish

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