I Like the composition as it is although the ground infont of the wall is, for me, a little distracting. Maybe if you were directly behind strobe... Oooer .... you could have included the floor across the width of the image. I have to say that knowing the shot was set up is a little dissapointing as it makes you start to look for points to critisise. The main one being the can of stella... there is no way i would risk my can falling out of my pocket if i was a spotty faced, hoodie wearing, criminal activited teenager. Or even now!!

So all that aside i really like the shot. Just wish i didn't know it was a set up..your honour.

Not doing much for me... I think a closer shot would have been more interesting as there appears to be a lot of detail in the bark. Perhaps a tighter crop?

I find the moulding line distracting. I would spend some time trying different angles too as something about this one doesn't quite gel with me. Good use of DOF though. Gonna have a go at something simillar myself. Oh try a different back ground plain or chess board. Other than that i like the image