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05/09/2008 - 12:46 AM
Very nice and sharp, lighting is good, just a few niggles. The lens is too wide causing distortion. I'm guessing you're limited for space and that 18mm does seem handy for getting everything in. She's got a hump-back caused from the jacket rucking, need to get some clamps on that. Her right knee is too bright, a bit of burning should help as it's pulling attention away from her face. Finally her right foot and the crop are too far forward causing proportions to be off, if she pulled her right foot back towards the stool and had the crop upright it might help. HTH.