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This little one has been keeping me very busy of late.....!! hence the absence from here for a while..
C&C's most welcome

Camera:Nikon D700 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-105.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:E M I L Y
Username:lauraHB lauraHB
Uploaded:6 Sep 2012 - 3:15 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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lauraHB
lauraHB  8121 forum posts Ireland
7 Sep 2012 - 9:57 AM

Thanks very much Ian for the User Award. Very much appreciated.

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banehawi Critique Team 10867 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2865 Constructive Critique Points
7 Sep 2012 - 5:58 PM

This is an attractive shot that has a lot going for it, mainly in the cuteness department.

There are some areas though IMO that if addresses can make this even more special.

The coloured border, and its close similarity to the tones of the babys face dont work for me.

The baby shot itsef has the far eye sharper than the near eye, - a problem introduced at the time of shooting, - always fcus on the near eye.

The colour tone of the childs face is odd, - it may be a deliberate attempt at a particular style, but doesnt look right.

So, to back up words with actions, Ive uploaded three mods. The first is the original, with what look like a better tone for the baby, and has a sharper near eye.

Mods 2 and 3 are variations on crops, with mod3 being the one I prefer.

Anyway, well done from another Dub (ex since 1982)



regards


Willie

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lauraHB
lauraHB  8121 forum posts Ireland
8 Sep 2012 - 4:16 PM

Cheers Willie for your critique. Very much appreciated. I wasn't sure about the colour of the border myself. Love your 3 mods, epecially 2 & 3. Will re-work it and give it another bash.
Laura

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