Hi Deavlin. Nice concept. I would have preferred the lady in focus with the gentleman blurred out. Again I would have had him a little bit further away and more blurred as as an attractive lady commands attention from far greater distances than 5 feet.
I would also suggest he could possibly be doing something like chatting to his mate with a coffee in his hand and that would add to the concept of the distraction -being distracted from a meeting to look at the girl.
Hope those comments are seen as constructive.