studioline

Fierce

Quote: This is nice, but to be honest, I would like to see the other eye and mouth in focus as well. It would be much more 'in your face' if especially the mouth was in focus. Just my opinion

It was a close decision but I wanted the image to be different as opposed to what one would expect. Still trying hard though. Thanks for the comment and the feedback, it makes all the difference.

By: studioline

The Zebra

Thank you very much photowanderer for that comment. Creative team will be delighted to hear that.

By: studioline

Pulp Fiction

Thank you for the award Youngjedi75.

By: studioline

Those days.

Thank you so much for the awards. I am trying to find meaning in my photography and hopefully I will continue to develop with time. Thanks again for all the votes.

By: studioline

Headlines

Thanks guys. It's the subtle change of angulation in the body that makes it work for me.

By: studioline

Read all about it.

You are bang on EyesFront with your observations...on all accounts. The male was put in as a stand in model and is indeed one of the photographers. I needed him just to ad a story to the image. Ironically as the shoot progressed, the better he got. I should have started shooting him 2 hours before the actual time!
Thank you so much for spending time to comment.

By: studioline

Black Widow

Thank you very much Eddie. It is indeed shot in a studio. The light is from a large soft box to her left and powered by a Bowens Gemini 250, backlit by barndoors and a fill in flash to her right (Gemini Esprits 200. I hope that helps.

By: studioline

Ann

amazing body shape.

By: Uppercut

Coal Tit

Yes I was Gil. Have you been there?

By: studioline

Moonlight Kiss

Thanks Polly. I have to admit it was a dalylight image and I added the moonlight in and cloud effect too.

By: studioline

Lost in thoughts

Quote: Damn, i saw the thumbnail and thought i was going to be clever by complimenting your vintage treatment and the tones and subtleties of light... but now i have seen your own note, i won't

Lol. I struggle for something to say about my images and felt that I had better put something in there. Lol. Glad you agree though.

By: studioline

Reasons to be cheerful

Thanks all for the votes/ comments. i can assure you that it is the comments that make it all the more interesting. I think that having posted the last 4 images with objects in the background, it appears that most photographers feel that they should be removed and that is even with the necessity of the objects to identify the location. I see John that you work nearby, could you tell me if you get the concept of the lat 4 images. I am trying to show Leith as it is on a normal day against a fashion element.
Normally I would have tidied up the image to make it look more appealing however I am hoping it will appeal to the small Leith community.

By: studioline

modern lady like to drink bird's nest

Love the model. Feel the composition could benefit from just being a little wider and also a little lighter on the right hand side of the image. I am sure a gradient could be applied. Skin tone are lovely.

By: foochai

Drama in Leith

I think both of you have a point in mentioning the distractions but I still think that this image is more intersting for the distractions however.....the client does not agree and sure enough the distractions have to be removed.

Thank you so much for the critique, as always it is very much appreciated.

By: studioline

Setting Sun at Cramond Harbour

I was aiming for a water colour dreamy kind of effect. Thanks for noticing.

By: studioline

Situation

It is a her Paul. Lol. I am glad you like it.

By: studioline

Red

I am loving everyything about this image but feel that the colours and vibrncy have been let down by a lack of directional light. You still get my vote as the image appeals to me.

By: CraigWalker

Small house -big dreams.

I tried making it look as if she was lying face up on a road - double yellow lines. May post that up.

By: studioline

Great tit in flight

that is an incredible photograph. Could you tell me at what focal length and speed you were shooting at? I have tried this shot many times and never managed to get as good a result as this.

By: trev4

Starlet

Thank you very much Monkeytravels. i have been noting I often seem to be ploughing my own field. Lol.
I am getting more and more mainstream with the colouring.

By: studioline

After Dark

Quote: Great pose,Shame about the fingers cut off.

I was wondering where to crop the image. Usually would have kept all the nails but thought that it looked quite nice with some of the nails cropped off. I have a much larger version which I could show the fingers though. Any thoughts from other viewers. Your opinions would really help me. Thanks footloose, I really appreciate the feedback.

By: studioline

When no one is watching

Cheers Rapido for pointing that out. I will remove it before it goes to print.

By: studioline

The Directors Choice

You are very correct Indrasish. There is a large soft box to the models left but it did not add to the image but took away from it.
Thank you for commenting and thank you for looking.

By: studioline

Carnival.

Got my attention. Lovely pose, different background and great colours too.

By: sherring

The Silent Chair

Quote: Awesome Composition.... Excellent Picture!!!!



Thanks was working on this heavily last night to get the overall composition confirmed. Thanks for appreciating it.

By: studioline

Scary Fairy.

But in a delightfully lovely way.

By: sherring

Siobhan

Lovely tones. Wish you could have continued those tones lower than her bra strap. Possibly a larger light source.
Well finished.

By: K4RL

Forever

Cheers Richsr.

By: studioline

stranger

Very well finished. Just that a wee bit more on the chin but what a fantastic shot. Simply stunning.

By: Uppercut

which is mine

Made me smile. Great candid shot. Thanks for sharing.

By: janhack