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"no speak"

"The kindest word in all the world is the unkind word, unsaid....!!!

a small girl at golebazar,sambalpur,odisha,india....!!!

Camera:Nokia 5130c
Lens:2m.p
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:"no speak"
Username:sunnilkalinndi sunnilkalinndi
Uploaded:22 Jun 2010 - 10:57 AM
Tags:Black & white, General, Portraits / people
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PauloNascimentoPhotography

great shot!
Paulo

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frz67
frz67  5 Italy32 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jun 2010 - 11:31 AM

It's a really good shot, well composed.
there is also a good tonal range, which is well exploited in the mono version.
The bamboo in the FG and the girl's shirt are a little bit too overexposed and the eye's attention is pulled towards the bottom of the picture, distracting from the beautiful smile of the girl.
In the mod, the highlights have been burned a bit, recovering also some details of the shirts.
Hope this helps
francesco

Last Modified By frz67 at 22 Jun 2010 - 11:34 AM

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newty1
newty1  8 United Kingdom
22 Jun 2010 - 11:39 AM

nice shot, works well in black n white

Andy

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Carrie_1
Carrie_1  4 Wales6 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jun 2010 - 12:12 PM

I argree with Francesco that the shirt needed recovering a little, I used shadow/highlight to bring back the brighter area and lift the shadows a touch. I also cropped your image as I felt the sign at the top and the bar across the bottom were a little distracting.
I do like the image though, it's well caught.
Caroline

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