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Not too pleased with this but struggling to find anything to upload - I bleached out the background to just offwhite but think it lacks something. Any suggestions for improvement?

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:50 mm
Title:Portrait
Username:Sus Sus
Uploaded:5 Jan 2006 - 12:58 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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tepot
tepot  104416 forum posts United Kingdom
5 Jan 2006 - 1:08 PM


Quote: Any suggestions for improvement?

don't tempt me....lol

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MDR_Photo
MDR_Photo e2 Member 10872 forum postsMDR_Photo vcard England
5 Jan 2006 - 1:52 PM

He looks a bit scared! More work needs doing on the left shoulder. Maybe some catchlights in the eyes?

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Sus
Sus e2 Member 103183 forum postsSus vcard England9 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2006 - 1:28 AM

Oh, I was hoping for sinister rather than scared! Thanks Michael.

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francisg
francisg e2 Member 10703 forum postsfrancisg vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2006 - 2:28 AM

It is a good head and shoulder portrait, but perhaps a little too moody for the guy's liking. He dosent look at all happy with the pose.

Frank

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himel
himel  1061 forum posts
6 Jan 2006 - 9:27 PM

Is he realy afraid or u asked him to do so?


Himel

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Sus
Sus e2 Member 103183 forum postsSus vcard England9 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2006 - 12:23 AM

So another no-no for men who don't smile! I think this is his natural expression, but I will persuade him to smile next time. Thanks for the comments.

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C_Daniels
C_Daniels e2 Member 9399 forum postsC_Daniels vcard England10 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2006 - 5:27 AM

I think a dark background would have suited the expression more and enhanced the mood ?

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mongogushi
mongogushi e2 Member 950 forum postsmongogushi vcard
17 Jan 2006 - 1:23 AM

nice shot, great expression!

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gajj
gajj e2 Member 1032 forum postsgajj vcard
2 Jun 2006 - 5:50 PM

Just absolutely in-your-face fabulous! Love it (sorry it took me 5 months to discover it!)
Regards,
Jan

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