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Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A580
Lens:Tamron 17-50 f2.8 Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 Apr 2014 - 4:30 PM
Focal Length:35mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:+0.7
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Portrait Shoot
Username:Swarnadip Swarnadip
Uploaded:22 Apr 2014 - 2:39 AM
Tags:Model fashion, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10911 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2909 Constructive Critique Points
22 Apr 2014 - 4:44 PM

Theres a lot to like here, nice model, eye contact, its just not quite sharp.

Adding a little in the mod makes a difference. The shot settings look ok, perhaps f/4 might improve things, (most lenses are sharper stopped down one or two stops) perhaps you didnt sharpen during re-sizing?


regards


Willie

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dudler
dudler Critique Team 11126 forum postsdudler vcard England339 Constructive Critique Points
25 Apr 2014 - 12:55 PM

Shooting at wide apertures can give lovely results, but the downside is that focus has to be very precise... Certainly, you should choose only one focus point, and the normal thing is to use the one that falls over the nearer eye.

Nice composition, good exposure, and a model who has that certain sparkle that grabs the eye and draws the viewer in.

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