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Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A580
Lens:Tamron AF 17-50mm F2.8 XR Di-II LD Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 Apr 2014 - 4:12 PM
Focal Length:35mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/80sec
Exposure Comp:+1
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Portrait Shoot VII
Username:Swarnadip Swarnadip
Uploaded:28 Apr 2014 - 1:28 AM
Tags:Glamour female model, Portraits / people
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handlerstudio
handlerstudio e2 Member 2handlerstudio vcard United States7 Constructive Critique Points
28 Apr 2014 - 2:35 AM

This is a lovely portrait.

Peter

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43684 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom107 Constructive Critique Points
28 Apr 2014 - 3:10 AM

A beautiful model and a beautiful portrait Swarna. My only suggestion would be to make a tighter crop.

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2985 Constructive Critique Points
28 Apr 2014 - 2:37 PM

Nice model, lovely pose.

Better I think if seh is off centre, with that fold in the background on the left removed.

From what I can see, the conversion to mono, if you did indeed convert from colour, has left her skin blotchy and uneven. This is usually caused by using a blue filter, or a blue bias in the conversion that brings out every little detail in the skins surface. Its best to get a less revealing skin tone, wilt less of the blue filter, more of the red channel.

I cant alter this in a mod, as its mono, but I can emulate it as cl;ose as I can with skin exposure and softening. Ive done that in the mod, with the crop, and sharpened her eyes, hair, mouth, neckwear.



regards


Willie

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