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Taken at Clumber Park, Nottinghamshire. First expriments with wide-angle lens! All critique is most welcome - I have a lot to learn!

Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:Sigma 10-20
Title:Church at Clumber
Username:tabby tabby
Uploaded:13 Sep 2007 - 9:53 AM
Tags:Architecture
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MarkT
MarkT  9119 forum posts England2 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2007 - 1:21 PM

Looks a bit flat, try using levels or curves to boost the contrast. The 10-20 is a wide angle lens so try and get closer to the church for a more interesting perspective. Try and look for some foreground interest to lead you into the scene, i.e. flowers, path etc.

Hope this helps.

Mark.

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tabby
tabby  10 England
13 Sep 2007 - 1:33 PM

Thanks for that, Mark. This is just about the first photo I have taken with this lens and I know I have lots to learn

Just looked at you photos. The word "wow" comes to mind!

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mikeyjuggler
13 Sep 2007 - 1:39 PM

Hi Linda,
maybe get less square on than you are to the chuch. I think that it is possibly suffering from the same symptoms as mine ( the next photo in critique gallery) of flat lighting. If you can go back to the same place it may well be worth taking a few more possibly earlier or later in the day to try and lift the masonry of the church.
keep trying and we'll get there!!!
mike

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joolsb
joolsb  927115 forum posts Switzerland38 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2007 - 5:09 PM

You have some good advice already but here's my 2p's worth...

You have to be careful when pointing the camera upwards at a building to avoid the 'falling-over' look. You can correct this in software later, of course, but it's fiddly and you end up sacrificing parts of your picture. Far better to either make a 'feature' of the converging verticals by getting in close (as Mark suggests) or you can go further away from the church and use a telephoto lens (making sure the camera back is flat-on to the subject).

One other point. Placing your subject right in the centre of your frame should generally be avoided in favour of an off-centre composition and this is where the famous rule-of-thirds comes in.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom845 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2007 - 8:45 AM

I've seen this shot dozens of times in my judging days - and for some reason everyone takes it from exactly this viewpoint. I'll bet there are tripod holes in the ground.

Good enough actually - as good as most of the similar ones that I've seen, but it does give the impression of a cardboard cut out falling over. Part correction of verticals would help, but I would prefer a different viewpoint entirely, possibly closer, then make the converging verticals part of the composition.

Convergence suggest height or distance.

Paul

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