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this was taken in a friends garden

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:coming or going
Username:Tash_hares Tash_hares
Uploaded:26 Sep 2009 - 8:20 AM
Tags:Wildlife / nature
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dbedford
dbedford  6 England6 Constructive Critique Points
26 Sep 2009 - 8:55 AM

Nice image in the making..
Flower is just a little out of focus and cut off to the right, needs to be just a little more of it in the frame so the eye is not looking outside the frame for the rest of it. The vertical line behind the flower is also just a little distracting. Good work . David

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Tash_hares
Tash_hares Junior Member 5 United Kingdom
26 Sep 2009 - 12:27 PM

ok thnx ill take that into thought thanks

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84284 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
26 Sep 2009 - 1:56 PM

I know how difficult it is to take flowers when out in the garden - just as you go to press the shutter the breeze shakes the flower! A good try though.

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Tash_hares
Tash_hares Junior Member 5 United Kingdom
26 Sep 2009 - 4:19 PM

thnx

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lolz
lolz Junior Member 5 United Kingdom
27 Sep 2009 - 5:03 PM

Wel done tishy
LOL ROTFL

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lolz
lolz Junior Member 5 United Kingdom
27 Sep 2009 - 5:04 PM

You could of cropped it a bit at the side so the photo will focus on the flower

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Tash_hares
Tash_hares Junior Member 5 United Kingdom
27 Sep 2009 - 7:00 PM

thnx for the real ansew

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MrsS
MrsS  84527 forum posts England18 Constructive Critique Points
28 Sep 2009 - 6:59 PM

Very difficult to get flowers to stay still! Smile

I do like the colours tho' Smile

Keep practising, it's how we all get better Smile

Fran x

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