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Winter thaw on the shore of a creek

Camera:Pentax K100D Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:28-55mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Winter Thaw
Username:taso taso
Uploaded:29 Apr 2008 - 6:10 AM
Tags:Black & white, Canada, Close-up / macro, Rocks, Specialist / abstract, Spring, Water
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CathR
CathR  7138 forum posts United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2008 - 8:51 AM

I like the patterns made by the cracking of the ice but what bothers me slightly is that I don't have much sense of the scale of the shot. Maybe something to give the viewer a sense of how big the rock and the creek is would be helpful.

Catherine

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kalseru
kalseru e2 Member 7kalseru vcard England9 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2008 - 10:47 PM

Nice textures and patterns a bit more contrast and some sharpening may reveal a bit more of the textures ?
Andy

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Tooth
Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
4 May 2008 - 11:52 PM

there's good potential here with nice patterns and textures. However I agree it's not immediately obvious what it is. A boost in contrast would certainly help. Compositionally i think the grey patch in the top right corner is a bit distracting asa it tends to drag the eye out of the frame

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