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I spotted these two fir tree and a little Hill and thought that they made a nice group, can't find a pleasing crop Sad Maybe it is the rock that spoils it ?

What can I do to improve this do you think, clone the rock out ?

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:10.0-20.0 mm f/4.0-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Jan 2013 - 4:51 PM
Focal Length:20mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:30sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:Fluorescent
Title:Fir Trees
Username:teabelly teabelly
Uploaded:9 Jan 2013 - 8:43 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Davesumner
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10 Jan 2013 - 1:45 AM
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Hi Teabelly,

First thing is that when grouping things in images, odd numbers work best so go with three or one and not two. This is because the human brain finds an odd number more asthetically pleasing than a even number.

With your image, I don't think the problem is with any one part of the shot, it is all of the elements that aren't right. The image appears hugely oversaturated and that blue sky definately doesn't help either. The lighting of the trees looks like weak on camera flash lighting which definately isn't helping although the eXif data says that the flash didn't fire so I have no idea what is going on there.

With shots like this you have to make them a bit different, this looks like you shot it as you were walking or driving by, try different angles, get higher or lower but don't take the shot from the first place you see. I have uploaded a mod where I cropped the image to just have one tree. I then dodged some of the branches and then reduced the blues and reds and increased the greens and yellows in the tree. Finally I sharpened.

I hope this helps

DaVeS

Last Modified By Davesumner at 10 Jan 2013 - 1:48 AM
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paulbroad
10 Jan 2013 - 7:18 PM
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I think you needed a different viewpoint in the first place. The rock works as part of the image, but a low viewpoint and wide angle, for example, might have added some impact. The main trees are too central and too normal to demand attention.

Paul

Mike43
Mike43 (e2 Member)
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Mike43 vcard England8 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jan 2013 - 10:55 AM
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I am looking at the rock and all I see is a Bison??? for the rest I agree with the above comments.

teabelly
13 Jan 2013 - 8:26 PM
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Thanks for the comments Grin

Dave your crop is miles better - the light came from my torch.

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