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Murphys pub Brandon Co Kerry

Title:Pub days...
Username:thearmsofvenusdemilo thearmsofvenusdemilo
Uploaded:19 Nov 2008 - 9:32 PM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
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DRicherby
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19 Nov 2008 - 10:05 PM
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The two men looking out of shot to the left are absolutely essential to the composition. Without them, the photo would be very busy and lacking in focus; with them, the viewer is directed to follow their gaze off to the relatively quiet lower-left area and can occasionally wander over to the wealth of detail to the upper right. The half-drunk pint on the bar is a subtle but important detail. Without it, the viewer might wonder why he or she was sitting in this bar, observing the scene but that glass includes the viewer in the scene.

I'm not a fan of the graininess in the large version because it de-emphasizes the two men. A rare occasion where the small version works better, for me. Smile

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mrswoolybill
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19 Nov 2008 - 10:19 PM
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Me, I'm a fan of graininess. I'm not a fan of beer - I've tried very hard to appreciate it and failed, I doubt that this will achieve any lasting conversion. But it's still one hell of a fine picture.
I do love the way the two profiled faces echo the pint glass and jug on the bar just perfectly.
Moira

Thanks David much appreciated, they are looking out a window overlooking the harbour at a catch of makeral being brouht ashore,

Colin

Buffalo_Tom
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19 Nov 2008 - 10:22 PM
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A superb composition Colin and glad you are posting again.
Brilliant.
Tom.

Thanks Moira, you and Mr woolybill must get over to the Doolin meet in April.......

Thanks Tom..

Sezz
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19 Nov 2008 - 10:27 PM
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I like the gritty feel/noise to this, along with the toning. Glad you told us what the guys where looking at - brings it all together now!

Sarah *

Thanks Sarah appreciate you taking the time to view..

DRicherby
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19 Nov 2008 - 10:56 PM
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Quote: thearmsofvenusdemilo wrote: they are looking out a window overlooking the harbour at a catch of makeral being brouht ashore.

Ha! In my imagination, they were watching the footie on the TV, scowling a bit because their team wasn't doing so well. Smile

dorricottpix_photography
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19 Nov 2008 - 10:58 PM
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You are the master of HDR - mostly I've been getting fed up of overcooked HDR images - but yours never fail to impress me and make me go WOW!

Brilliant.

Bruce

dathersmith
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19 Nov 2008 - 11:11 PM
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Expertly composed shot, processed to perfection.

Darren.

Eviscera
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19 Nov 2008 - 11:15 PM
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nothing fishy about this image colin , its first class and will take a week to appreciate !

dave

LuzDeNoche
20 Nov 2008 - 4:23 AM
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Classic thearmsofvenusdemilo treatment here, and a composition that is both disturbing and intriguing. The eye is drawn out towards whatever the men might be looking at (and the mind boggles!) whilst the weight of the elements around the bar pulls us back in again.
Just might get a little dizzy with the eyes doing all that to-ing and fro-ing Wink
Smile Lucy

lauraHB
20 Nov 2008 - 10:29 AM
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A fantastic shot Colin. I love the grain in this. The whole composition works perfectly, although I do feel a strong urge to jump in and grab that Guinness.. yummy!!
Laura

Jou©o
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20 Nov 2008 - 3:34 PM
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great work, Colin!

Jouko

There is a lot going on in this shot Colin, nevertheless it works for me. I think its the combination of intrigue and the timeless quality given to it by the mono conversion and hdr processing.

Jim

Sue_R
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20 Nov 2008 - 8:10 PM
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Great image. Well composed and the effect you've used is just perfect for the subject.

Sue


Quote: There is a lot going on in this shot Colin, nevertheless it works for me. I think its the combination of intrigue and the timeless quality given to it by the mono conversion and hdr processing.

Jim

Perfect... lovely to see you uploading again colin... always inspirational... !!!!

Scorcher

Mavis
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24 Nov 2008 - 10:23 AM
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Hey Colin what date in April is the Doolin meet ?
These two men are very interested in the Mackerel catch being brought in . I like the old world feel to this Pub . Can't be doing with modern ones . I love Beer Smile xx

Tooth
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25 Nov 2008 - 5:19 PM
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Hi Col Hi Maeve - yes, does this whet the appetite for Doolin or what?

Nearly certainly it'll be the weekend of the time change, 27-30 March, as martin has something on the weekend after. I have to chat to Maeve to confirm the house is \ok |(and hopefully the neighbour's)

In the meantime, top shot, very evocative - a pint of Graininess please Smile

Are we there yet... Maybe we should invite Keith and Mads...

tripodted
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26 Nov 2008 - 3:03 PM
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A timeless image, Colin. I agree with DRicherby about the grain as I find it a little distracting in the large version but this is only my opinion and over all I still think it's a cracker.
I hope you are keeping better and back to your old self again.
Ted

Valerie1
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27 Nov 2008 - 9:47 PM
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Good shot. I see the Guinness but the Bushmills doesn't seem to have travelled to Kerry.
Valerie

joseph
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4 Dec 2008 - 8:22 PM
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Perfection Colin....Perfection...Rgds Joe.

Ayelet_A
6 Dec 2008 - 4:32 PM
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Superb image - you can always find new details and the grayness really adds to the atmosphere. Brilliant work.

Ayelet

ugly
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8 Dec 2008 - 8:37 AM
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A great image. I don't like grain add to a shot but this time I think you got it right. I like the half drunk pint of the black stuff on the bar that holds the shot at the centre..
This is a great bit of work.....

Have a happy X-MASS and a great NEW YEAR to you and your family....

Dave

Goggz
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16 Dec 2008 - 12:08 AM
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That's me on the left Smile

Great stuff Colin Smile
Cheers, Goggz

Roll on Doolin!

Techno
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19 Dec 2008 - 6:05 PM
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Love this capture, everything about it....Brought out the soapboxes on this one! well done..

Mal

Dear Colin
I wish you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Best regards
George Rusky

Skye24Blue
20 Dec 2008 - 11:17 AM
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Eye-catching and intriguing. Well done.
Mac

porty2003
7 Jan 2009 - 11:42 AM
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Great mono,and that looks like my kind of pub!!

John

iancatch
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19 Feb 2009 - 8:58 PM
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Personally I love all the detail HDR enables you to bring to a shot. Its an intriguing shot you could look at for a week and not see everything. Is it your pint on the bar Colin?

Ian

pdas
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5 Aug 2009 - 1:52 AM
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Grains in the pic really highlights the old fashioned pub. Real old days feeling. I love it. pdas

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