Its a great idea, but unfortunately the room details and lighting you have pasted on the mirror do not match the real room and lighting.

Don't get me wrong its a striking image, but further study does show inconsistency.

Still worth a vote.

Alister

This is the best picture so far of the beautiful Jade in my opinion, simple and basic, without props or awkward posing, and above all keeping the attention exactally where it should be - on Jade.

I agree on the previous point about the table top where Jade is kneeling but apart from that it is a very nice simple nude.

I have one simple rule with the female nude that it is impossible to improve on nature's beauty with props or jewelery. The challenge is to use light to create the shape and form, and very often to tailor that need to a particular model and situation, this comes with experience, what works best for the model and even comes down to the mood of the model and photographer on the day.

Love this one, hope to see a lot more of the lovely Jade.

Alister

Fiona is a very attractive young woman, and she makes the image, but by trying to get a retro look, the hairstyle while very nice and suits Fiona very well, looks quite modern IMO.

If she was to wear it in a 60's bob it would fit the mood just right.

Please don't take this as a critisism, its just an observation, and I really like the picture.

Alister

Much much better than yesterdays picture, love the eye contact and the full frontal pose, as another comment please be careful with the use of jewelery, as later you may look at the picture and regret it's presence.

The necklace is not too bad on this shot, but for most glamour pictures its an added distraction and adds nothing to shot.

Just my opinion, but another lovely shot of the very pretty Debbie.

Alister

Hello Iain, appreciate what you were trying to acheive here, and in itself is a very pleasant image, and you have found a very good model in Debbie.

However in my opinion you have to be little careful with this type of glamour shot with the model looking away from the camera, especially when the lighting is flat (typically glamour), because it creates a feeling of 'detachment' like what is she looking at. It does occasionally work, but the elements are largely objective.

All I can say is before I moved house last time I went through all my prints and had a massive clearout and I think all bar a few I threw out nearly all the picture where the model was looking away, because with a more experienced eye

In saying that, with this type of picture it can work if she is looking at the elastic of her knickers or maybe her breast as there is a focal point.

Like the picture, and well worthy of a vote.

Alister