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I'm partial to the tight framing ...
Its a priceless expression ... the colour is high impact to ... I'm not sure what it is about the shot that is not quite right though ... I'll ignore my own predudice about the alt cliche of wings, thats not the issue, its technically sound if a little flat ... I dont know how many strobes you used but for instance if you used two, meter for them both and then turn one down a notch or alternatively move one of them around your model further to the side to a more oblique angle and move your other strobe further back ... ideally the best way to avoid flat images when working in a fairly small space is to only use one strobe and a reflector ...
Fantastic composition ... normally putting your subject in the centre of the image would result in loss of narrative however the lines of the bridge lead away from Jen and infront you have a vista of the river framed by the bridge .... a possable path ahead and the path already travelled .. the eyes to the camera generally would be a no no in an editorial image such as this but in this case they ask a question ... its a moment on a jorney, a point where a decision should be made, and a search for guidence ... the fact the scene is set on a bridge re-enforces the simbolism ... the whole image is loaded with metaphor and simbolism wether intentional or not ...
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