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Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S9500 Zoom
Lens:28-300mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:5 Jan 2005 - 3:25 AM
Focal Length:19mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/70sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:80
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:On, Fired
Title:April sunset
Username:throgmorton throgmorton
Uploaded:16 Apr 2011 - 1:44 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8763 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1592 Constructive Critique Points
17 Apr 2011 - 4:52 PM

Hello, Roger. I can understand why you wanted to capture this amazing sunset, with the rays at the bottom and contrasting clouds. However, there is a lot of noise throughout the image. Also, the image has lost detail where the brightness of the sun is penetrating the clouds. Since you only have a small bit of landscape at the bottom, I feel it is unnecessary, so have cropped the bottom and right side in my modification. I used noise removal and the image has inevitably lost some of its detail in the process, so I am not too happy with it. I also added a slight tone to the white area.
Pamela.

Last Modified By pamelajean at 17 Apr 2011 - 4:54 PM

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Canonshots
17 Apr 2011 - 5:33 PM

I'm not happy with pamelajean's mod, which I feel takes away all sense of scale from the image. I like it as it is apart from the green cast, which looks very odd in a sunset and needs a simple correction in post-production.

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