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Trainspotting at Sittingbourne station.Any criticisms will be noted and acted upon if valid.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D7000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-200.0 mm f/3.5-6.3
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:28 Jun 2012 - 2:57 AM
Focal Length:200mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/6.3
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/400sec
Exposure Comp:-1.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:As Shot
Title:Black Five approaching
Username:throgmorton throgmorton
Uploaded:27 Aug 2012 - 8:36 PM
Tags:Transport
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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 41174 forum posts United Kingdom196 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2012 - 8:58 PM

The main criticism for me, is that the train is a long way away!
It would have been a better image if you had the train closer, preferably with it at the end of the platform especially if it comes in this side.
The pic suffers a little by shooting into the light which has lowered the contrast and the jumble of rails and foreground is untidy, but a better view of the train would nullify this.

I'm sure you have better images of this scene.

Nick

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pablophotographer

Title says the truth, Black 5 approaching. It looks tiny though.

My main scepticism usually in a picture is the aesthetic aspect of it. People rush into taking pictures. Especially with trains that's the least beneficial approach. they arrive on a timetable (usually late) so if you want to take a good picture make sure you are there on time. Find a location, with good view. Avoid tripods, in case someone trips on them, if you want to lean in a pillar for stability, feel free to (you can use faster iso, wider aperture, or even a weight - the trick is to pull upwards as it pulls down and balance it). Should you have done so you wouldn't but have noticed the platform on the left bottom corner spoiling the excellent pattern the rails create. You have shot from eye level and you are pointing the camera downwards. If you had knelled you would most probably had excluded the platform and maybe some of the close rails. But then, for me you are on the wrong spot. I would suggest you to move a bit to the right, exclude the platform from your picture shoot after the train arrives to the point where the tree now is hiding part of it. Missed it this time? No worries, trains come back. Enjoy.

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juliewhite
28 Aug 2012 - 4:06 PM

Hi Throgmorton,


I would say that now the photo has been snapped...could you crop and chop to get the best out of this shot, and store all the very valid advice from above for the next shot?

Julie

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