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Please describe your photo here.At Dungeness,Kent three weeks ago.

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Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-200.0 mm f/3.5-6.3
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:7 May 2012 - 4:08 PM
Focal Length:25mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/4000sec
Exposure Comp:-2.0
ISO:320
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Hut and nets
Username:throgmorton throgmorton
Uploaded:18 May 2012 - 7:28 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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SueEley
SueEley e2 Member 8271 forum postsSueEley vcard Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
19 May 2012 - 5:19 PM

You had a good day for it, and spotted a good subject. I don't think I would have used quite this crop, and will upload a mod. For me the biggest issue is that your depth of field is not enough to get the whole shed in focus, and you as really didn't need a shutter speed of 1/4000 for a static object you should have used a smaller aperture and got more in focus.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom855 Constructive Critique Points
19 May 2012 - 6:04 PM

Technically well exposed and sharp, but really needs a bit more dramatic composition, weather or both to lift from a record to a strong composition. i note you choose some strange combinations of shutter speed and aperture? Think I would drop ISO and shutter speed for this type of image.

Paul

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