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Please describe your photo here.Taken at Dungeness two weeks ago.

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Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-200.0 mm f/3.5-6.3
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:7 May 2012 - 4:15 PM
Focal Length:36mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.4
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/3200sec
Exposure Comp:-2.0
ISO:320
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Old boat
Username:throgmorton throgmorton
Uploaded:17 May 2012 - 9:40 AM
Tags:Hdr, Landscape / travel
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Chinga
Chinga e2 Member 3Chinga vcard United Kingdom
17 May 2012 - 10:21 AM

Good subject! It's a good composition. I would give it a touch more contrast. IB

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
17 May 2012 - 4:10 PM

It is a nice shot, and a good find.

Good points made above, and in addition, I would provide some more height by adding canvas and cloning in some sky.


Ive loaded a mod with straightening, contrast, and re composition with more sky.


Hope this is of some help.



regards



Williw

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8769 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1598 Constructive Critique Points
17 May 2012 - 6:56 PM

A wonderful subject, Roger, lots of texture and decay.
I think that the image would benefit from a bit more space on the right, which I have done in my modification. I also made a few adjustments in levels.
Did you change the sky, Roger? There are signs around the boat of something having been done, but I'm not sure what, and I don't think it's due to the HDR treatment.
Pamela.

Last Modified By pamelajean at 17 May 2012 - 6:56 PM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
18 May 2012 - 6:40 PM

There are some strange artefacts in the beach on the right and, for me, a rather un-natural look. Too contrasty I think. I would have used a smaller aperture and slower shutter speed too - suspect a bit of over sharpening.

Paul

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