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Camera:Canon EOS 300D
Title:Wollaton rebuilt!
Username:tigertot tigertot
Uploaded:9 Feb 2004 - 7:41 AM
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User_Removed
9 Feb 2004 - 7:46 AM

I have only just seen the original as a consequence of you posting this version and I think that this one is a great improvment.

The border was unnecessary and detracted from the image so here we can see your photographin all it's glory.

The buildings are also straight edged with no converging verticals which is always a bonus Smile

This a cracking image "made" (in my opinion) by the wonderful sky.

If I might make a suggestion - have you room on the orginal photograph to move the building away from dead centre. I am a great one for breaking the rules but I do feel that aligning the building on one of the thirds would be more aesthetically pleasing.

Nonetheless - an excellent photograph

Barrie Smile

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Mavis
Mavis e2 Member 12143 forum postsMavis vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2004 - 7:47 AM

The building stands out well from the dark blue sky and sweeping, green , manicured lawns .

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lucrezia
lucrezia  1090 forum posts United Kingdom
9 Feb 2004 - 8:42 AM

Tweaking the color of the sky and the other minor changes have definitely enhanced the image.

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Gary_Williams
9 Feb 2004 - 8:46 AM

Nice shot, love the contrasting colours between the grass, building & sky. Works for me.

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tigertot
tigertot  1136 forum posts England
9 Feb 2004 - 8:49 AM

Thanks for the feedback - have to agree I like it much better too. Barrie, I agree about rule of thirds, I guess I was too taken up with the sky to think logically!!

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roy clark
roy clark  10 United Kingdom
9 Feb 2004 - 11:24 AM

Superb sky and light really compliment the building.

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geegee
geegee  1029 forum posts England
9 Feb 2004 - 11:44 AM

This is just superb. The lighting is excellent. Gets my click.

George.

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dfawbert  10310 forum posts
9 Feb 2004 - 1:20 PM

Great image -- just the right amount of tweaking has been done. Love the looming sky.

Dave

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keithh
keithh  1022726 forum posts Wallis and Futuna29 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2004 - 3:24 PM

Totally transformed and now the eye sees the subject and the light instead of trying to correct it. click

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banburymike
10 Feb 2004 - 12:43 PM

Great shot........But could you ask before you come in to my garden to take pics again Smile

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tigertot
tigertot  1136 forum posts England
10 Feb 2004 - 2:31 PM

Ok - sorry Mike! Thanks for the positive feedback - most helpful.

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zippie
zippie  101329 forum posts England
11 Feb 2004 - 2:43 PM

Wow, this is almost a different pic from the first version.

Wollaton really stands out well fromt he sky. Great dramatic shot.

Andy

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seven21  10196 forum posts
12 Feb 2004 - 11:22 PM

Great shot - simple composition which allows the full glory of the subject , sky and foreground to work brilliantly together. - steve

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