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Just starting out. Advice much appreciated.

Camera:Canon 350
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Traflagar Square
Username:timmorley25 timmorley25
Uploaded:6 Nov 2010 - 4:21 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Night / low light
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CathR
CathR e2 Member 7139 forum postsCathR vcard United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
6 Nov 2010 - 4:34 PM

Have you got a bigger shot, Tim? You are allowed a max of 600 pixels on the longest side whereas your shot is only 400 pixels. With your large border as well it is really difficult to see what is going on.

Best wishes

Catherine

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achieverswales e2 Member 4achieverswales vcard Wales101 Constructive Critique Points
6 Nov 2010 - 4:53 PM


Quote: Have you got a bigger shot, Tim? You are allowed a max of 600 pixels on the longest side whereas your shot is only 400 pixels. With your large border as well it is really difficult to see what is going on.

Best wishes

Catherine

Agree with above, but also something strange, the Christmas tree is leaning to the right but the fountain is leaning to the left, if you level to photo it would cause the tree to be at more of an angle strange effect, the colours and reflection are great.

Regards

Trev.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
6 Nov 2010 - 5:15 PM

Hi Tim,

Apart from the size issue above, this neeeds to be sharpened before you upload it after re sizing, and due to the wide angle lens, you have converging verticals that need to be straightened.

If you take the shot from a side-on angle like this, you can end up with verticals that converge differently which can be hard to correct, so your best to take the shot straight on to include the tree and fountain so the both lean the same amount, - if possible of course.


Ive loaded a mod as an example, - doesn't look great though due to the small size.



Hope this helps,



Regards



Willie

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