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Using the same techniques as mentioned in "BACK TO AUCHMAR MANOR ESTATE" along with the title saying everything about this shot.

Brand:PENTAX Corporation
Camera:Pentax *ist DL2 Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:smc PENTAX-DA 18-55mm F3.5-5.6 AL
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:6 May 2012 - 10:28 AM
Focal Length:33mm
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Landscape
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:AUCHMAR MANOR ESTATE BACK GARDEN
Username:TimothyDMorton TimothyDMorton
Uploaded:18 May 2012 - 12:31 AM
Tags:AUCHMAR MANOR ESTATE, Back garden, Digitally manipulated, DOORS OPEN 2012, Hamilton, Landscape / travel, Ontario
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ams99
ams99 Junior Member 365 forum posts England9 Constructive Critique Points
18 May 2012 - 1:01 PM

I'm not sure of your intentions with this one? For obvious improvement i would look at removing the intruding branch / tree on the RHS. Maybe for composition you could incorporate all of the trees with the path running through as opposed to cutting the tops off. Colour wise it may look better with the different shades of green on the leaves being more prominent. Currently they are competing (and losing) with the greens of the grass.

It looks as though you had difficult conditions to battle against with the bright sky competing with the relative shade below the tree tops

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
19 May 2012 - 6:36 PM

I would crop a lot off the top to get rid of much of the sky giving a letterbox, but for me it needs a figure on that track to give some kind of focal point, which is, otherwise, just not there.

Paul

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