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The master of the event on the 11TH November 2013 reading from his script, and thanks the vets for their service to Canada over the years.

The post processing work was in Camera-in-the-RAW applied auto the two tabs, and then opened in Adobe Photoshop Elements 7 where I resized it to be 600 x 401 pixels, and then applied the UNSHARP MASK till I liked the Fixed using the results.

Brand:PENTAX Corporation
Camera:Pentax *ist DL2 Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:smc PENTAX-DA 18-55mm F3.5-5.6 AL
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:11 Nov 2013 - 11:14 AM
Focal Length:40mm
Aperture:f/4.5
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Portrait
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Unknown (0x48)
White Balance:Auto
Title:I WISH TO THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR SERVICE TO CANADA
Username:TimothyDMorton TimothyDMorton
Uploaded:21 Nov 2013 - 12:30 AM
Tags:11TH DAY OF THE 11TH MONTH, GORE PRRK, Hamilton, Ontario, Photo journalism, Portrait, Thank you
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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2013 - 2:15 PM

Same comment as the others, really. You need to separate the speaker from the crowd and he merges in quite badly. Almost has to be a change of shooting position. I would try and not use the camera mode settings. You loose control.

Paul

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 7394 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom965 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2013 - 3:39 PM

Your maximum available aperture isn't showing up but at 40mm I guess you couldn't have gone lower than F4.5. You've done the best you could under the circumstances.

But as Paul says, bite the bullet and take control! The camera has a good brain but no imagination or intuition, it can't guess what you want to achieve.
Moira

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pablophotographer

I chatted with a friend today, a well paid paparazzi, I had not spoken to him for ages; we chatted in a rush about how we are in life and what we do; he laughed at my studies... We parted, till next time... which may take again too long to happen, although we both want it.

Thinking of our chat now, I imagine him saying to me: 'Study your mistakes'.

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