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11 Oct 2012 - 4:05 PM

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pablophotographer

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11 Oct 2012 - 4:05 PM

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Hi.

In some aspects the light has made this picture look like a painting. I refer to the flower's left top part, the red faints like paint on a brush moved from inside of the flower outwards. I find this very artistic. I am skeptic about the aperture used. I think f29 gave a very sharp edge to the top right of the flower and makes it look as if it is cut and imposed on the white background. I guess you used two sources of light form two directions I would either try a third light form top right, if you insist using the softbox on the right or a smaller aperture.

Also you can try to shoot it in a horizontal format and see which you like best.

Sooty_1 (Critique Team)

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11 Oct 2012 - 11:41 PM

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I prefer the re-oriented version, and one other thing is the quite heavy shadow inside the flower. I might have used a small white reflector to bounce a little light inside from the front. I think it would have made the flower look more delicate.

Nick