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This is an excellent portrait idea. Although taken in dull flat lighting, this would be good to see again, exact same angle, but in warn sunset light across the relief of the wall and your model. Only this time lighting will be tricky and your model will be required to have a genuine smile to reflect the warm light. Not so easy. TG
Looks like you have plenty of fine detail there. I suspect ISO 800 with a 7D would allow a 1/3rd crop from the right side. That would still leave the best part of Mum's wing and bring the little one closer. Comp would be improved with tiny at 1/3rd and not at bullseye position. Trim from top for format. TG
We all prefer the B&W as it is darker and so suits the 'Boneyard' setting much better. The colour version could work way better if you cranked the 'high noon' away down to 'dusk' level.
Two things...[1] Crop both left and right. Left to near the building. You will still have ample tree suggestions there. On the right to between the chimney and peaked roof. No need for upper tree presence on the right. These crops will reduce the plain part of the sky by half and bring your main interest forward.
There are many places along canals that still have this 'old Ontario look' This is really two images in one. The Greystone and clock tower, [Vertical crop just right of the yellow],
First I like this very much. Dead center gives it a doc. or record flavour. Middle placement top to bottom is good so as to have not too much sky. Left to right though could be shifted rightwards. I don't want to see that little flat roof on the right horizon. I do want to see more of the tree and whatever else on the left. If the right border cut through the fence post in the bush, I think this could be more pleasing. TG