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Camera:Nikon D800 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikkor 85/1.4 G Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:M.
Username:topol topol
Uploaded:13 Sep 2012 - 8:17 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Mayfly
Mayfly  8485 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2012 - 8:26 AM

Beautiful light and tones, I find the light area at the top a little distracting (to my eye) but still makes for a very pleasing image.

Cheers,

Andy.

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philhomer
philhomer  329 forum posts England32 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2012 - 8:30 AM

as above - have you looked at a version with the lighter area above cloned or cropped? other than thta minor point, a beautiful image.

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England205 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2012 - 8:36 AM

Like the eye connection and tones, but the bright high light at the top of the image draws the eye, worth cloneing out IMHO
Regards Richard

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DOGSBODY
DOGSBODY e2 Member 51432 forum postsDOGSBODY vcard England30 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2012 - 8:47 AM

Yes, crop off that light area at the top and you will turn a very good image into something even better. Andy

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 32321 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom96 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2012 - 9:10 AM

A rather beautiful and seductive image, gorgeous light, so very enticing.

Nathan

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Snapper_T
Snapper_T  10848 forum posts United Kingdom
13 Sep 2012 - 10:25 AM

An eyecatching shot. As already said, the bright area at the top is distracting, so maybe clone that to keep the space above the model instead of cropping. Or crop to a portrait format. Just thoughts.

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ugly
ugly e2 Member 6ugly vcard United Kingdom55 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2012 - 12:32 PM

Very nice work...
Great eyes...
One thing distracts me from her it that burnt out area above her head...
I think it a crop from a lager image may be the sun behind her...
Other wise I think it a top class image...

Dave

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Pete
Pete Site Moderator 1218416 forum postsPete vcard ePz Advertiser England96 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2012 - 3:35 PM

good to see you post again Smile

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Philip_H
Philip_H  2 United Kingdom
13 Sep 2012 - 8:45 PM

Striking portrait. Pleased to click you to 30.

P.

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Edben
Edben  2 United Kingdom
13 Sep 2012 - 9:17 PM

Beautiful dark eyes. I do agree that the top of the image is slightly distracting but overall a great shot.

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michaelo
michaelo e2 Member 7michaelo vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
16 Sep 2012 - 9:08 PM

stunning eye capture!!!

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Ian-Jones
Ian-Jones  10129 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
24 Sep 2012 - 1:12 PM

Yep. Definitely a goodie. As has been said before, the onln niggle is the higlight at the top of the image.

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