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One from my first model shoot in november this year comments are most welcome i would like to get honest opinions so dont be shy. thanks for looking

Regards

Carl

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 50mm f1.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:13 Nov 2011 - 2:03 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.7
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/1000sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Look.
Username:torres99 torres99
Uploaded:17 Dec 2011 - 9:55 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated., Flash / lighting, Portrait / people. NikonD90. Nikon 50mm 1.8 Black & White, Portraits / people
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Mrserenesunrise
Mrserenesunrise e2 Member 350 forum postsMrserenesunrise vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
18 Dec 2011 - 7:05 PM

Hi Carl,
Not a bad effort for your first attempt.
You have a pretty model in front of your camera, and it is easy to forget the backgroundWink You have a tree coming out of your models head, which would be ok if the whole of the background was dark. The large areas of sky, focus the eye onto the tree.
I hope this has been helpful.
Tim

Last Modified By Mrserenesunrise at 18 Dec 2011 - 7:05 PM

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torres99
torres99  5119 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Dec 2011 - 8:27 PM

Thanks Tim very helpful indeed taken onboard will remember thanks

Regards

Carl

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