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Hi Everyone

Thank you to everyone who commented and gave feedback on yesterdays image, I have taken on board everything you have said and have modified my own image as a result.
Here is another one, please feel free to critique this image, it's what I want, it's the only way for me to learn and improve.
Best Wishes
Tracey

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:55-250mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Worried Looks
Username:Tracey_McGovern Tracey_McGovern
Uploaded:5 Nov 2011 - 8:25 PM
Tags:Childern, Mono, Portrait, Portraits / people, Travel, Uganda
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senn
senn e2 Member 2senn vcard Belgium1 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2011 - 9:50 PM

grrreat shot !..

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SlowSong
SlowSong e2 Member 53989 forum postsSlowSong vcard England28 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2011 - 9:57 PM

Tracey, the best one in your pf by far. This is excellent. Beautiful close up, eye contact brilliant, expression priceless.
Chris

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johnriley1uk
johnriley1uk e2 Member 926 forum postsjohnriley1uk vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2011 - 10:49 PM

A seriously good and powerful portrait.

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whiteboxer
5 Nov 2011 - 11:39 PM

Nice one tracey, congratulations on the award.Grin
Keith.

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RLF
RLF e2 Member 4RLF vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
6 Nov 2011 - 12:18 AM

Mesmerizing.
Stunning photography.
Beautifully cropped too.

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NeilWigan
NeilWigan e2 Member 3NeilWigan vcard England15 Constructive Critique Points
6 Nov 2011 - 1:00 AM

looks good here Tracy .

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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 31125 forum posts United Kingdom192 Constructive Critique Points
6 Nov 2011 - 1:30 PM

Great, arresting image with perfect eye contact. My only crit is the bright patch on the child's top, it draws attention because it is slightly blown. A small crop and reduction of that brightness would be good, for me.

Nick

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 9706 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2668 Constructive Critique Points
6 Nov 2011 - 3:58 PM

Excellent shot Tracey, gorgeous expression and eye contact. Toning works well with the subject. I would suggest just as Nick has done re the bright top, and the mod hes loaded shows the difference.



regards


Willie

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Tracey_McGovern
Tracey_McGovern e2 Member 5Tracey_McGovern vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
6 Nov 2011 - 8:35 PM

Thank you for all your comments and feedback and the mods that Willie has made, yes, the tighter crop works well, thank you for taking the time to look at it and have a go at improving it.
Best Wishes
Tracey

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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 31125 forum posts United Kingdom192 Constructive Critique Points
7 Nov 2011 - 11:48 PM

Hey.....I did the mod!!!

Tongue

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Tracey_McGovern
Tracey_McGovern e2 Member 5Tracey_McGovern vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
8 Nov 2011 - 6:57 PM

Ooops - Sorry Nick, my mistake, you're absolutely right, it was you how did the modification, sooooo sorry Sad
Tracey Smile

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snapperkate
18 Nov 2011 - 2:29 PM

Wow love the little child

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mute
mute  7 Maldives
16 Jan 2012 - 4:31 AM

Just brilliant portraiture,

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