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Taken in London on the day of the Royal Wedding. Saw this young girl sat on a wall on the Mall.

Brand:Nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:80.0-200.0 mm f/2.8
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:29 Apr 2011 - 12:48 PM
Focal Length:200mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:No Flash
Title:deep in thought
Username:TrevorH TrevorH
Uploaded:7 Jun 2011 - 12:26 AM
Tags:Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 103995 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland24 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jun 2011 - 8:37 AM

stunning Smile

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LexEquine
LexEquine  8 United States19 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jun 2011 - 11:10 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Excellent skin tones, color, & clarity on this full portrait capture, Trevor. The model has a very demure subtle & beautiful smile. Unfortunately, the photograph is somewhat degraded by the very bright white highlights background on the left side. This distracts the viewer, momentarily in looking at her beautiful face. However, this image can be 'saved with a very simple' remedy. Just perform a "close crop,"...from the 'left side of the image frame,' into the mid-lateral portion of her lovely brown hair,...which excludes "all the white" from your "new portrait picture." Just try this tight crop, and then re-optimize all your image parameters, & 'repost this image!' Good Luck.

Regards...Peter Smile

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LexEquine
LexEquine  8 United States19 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jun 2011 - 10:27 PM

No critique point,..."for this Basic Facet in Photography???"

"Shame on the EPZ Critique Staff." 'Quite "biased," in my Opinion,' in awarding critique points. Come on, now...LexEquine SadTongue

Last Modified By LexEquine at 9 Jun 2011 - 10:28 PM

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LexEquine  8 United States19 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2011 - 11:19 PM

'I am appreciative of the consideration' for the granting of a point for my critique & suggestions for this nice candid portrait, taken on the Day of the Royal Wedding. Now, Trevor,...I am waiting for the 'reposting of your fine image.' Thanks, to the 'Critique Team' for acknowledging my point of view. I did not intend it to be taken in a harsh light. Now, I will continue to spend time on images that could be critiqued & benefited from a positive perspective.

Regards...Peter

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TrevorH
TrevorH  7 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jul 2013 - 11:57 AM

Hi Peter,
Sorry for the lack of response, Have not seen the comments before, I agree that a tight crop would work here as being a member of a camera club and getting marked down for the hated white light in pictures I can see it now. I will try the crop at sometime in the future and repost to let all see what you are on about. Thanks for the critique much appreciated and again sorry for not getting back to you sooner than this.
Trevor.

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