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This wedding took place on a particularly hot day, and in the midday sun. Becky had become really overheated and flustered so she sat down here just for a break.
I took this shot of her and asked her to look towards the window to give more light to her face. I love the shot and so does she, but my own critique raises the following:
I should have removed the cushions under her right arm.
I should have ensure her feet weren't resting on the train.
I wish I had included more of the room above her OR should I crop in tighter? Can't quite decide on that one.
Comments welcomed,
Trudy
| Camera: | Canon EOS 5D |
| Lens: | Canon 24-105 |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Title: | Take a breath |
| Username: | 
trivets12 |
| Uploaded: | 25 Aug 2009 - 4:44 PM |
| Tags: | Black & white, Digitally manipulated, Fashion, Portraits / people, Wedding / social |
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| Votes: | 14 |
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I do not think the cushion is under the arm is a problem however I do find the cushion near the head a bit distracting, also the cloth coming in to the picture on the right hand side i would remove as for the feet i can't really see very well.
But all said & done you have captured a wonderful image with good tones.
Carl
It's all very well to say these things in hindsight when you have the luxury of time looking at your shots
Lovely shot, a tad small to see any real detail. I think I would have cropped the lhs a bit just to get rid of the curtain and maybe have positioned myself slightly higher on a small ladder to see a bit more down onto the dress but apart from that, nicely done
Ange
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