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W1ldside

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19 Jun 2010 - 12:53 PM

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Definately works very appealing and Innovative composition...
Great natural feel and different
Cheers Rick

Andrew_Hurley (e2 Member)

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19 Jun 2010 - 1:48 PM

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I don't think you've done anything wrong in this picture. Your model looks relaxed and she is well posed. Her left foot (to our right) is close to the edge of the frame so something you need to be careful of. The important thing is you've sorted the background out, it is very subdued with no bright highlights to distract the eye.

A good competent portrait, in a relaxed setting.

Andrew.

Andrew_Hurley (e2 Member)

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20 Jun 2010 - 1:19 AM

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Quote: Thanks guys for your thoughts. I am not sure about her arms though... For me they look not in the place... Not even sure..

You could be right about her arms, it's as though she is using them to cover something up, but it looks ok to me.

Professional models know how to pose so you don't have to worry about that, if you are using friends or models with limited experience, you need to direct them more. Hands and arms can be a big problem, digital 'film' is free so experiment as much as you want.

MartinAgius

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21 Jun 2010 - 7:39 AM

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Good pic

tumienis

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21 Jun 2010 - 3:14 PM

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Thanks guys! And thank you Pete! What a day... I was happy with the colors, just not sure about the arms. By the way the storm in the back was approaching with thunder lighting every 30 seconds, However, I didn't catch it up...