Made Up

MediumSizeUnavailable (e2 Member)

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25 Oct 2006 - 1:34 PM

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sorry, no critique from me, just admiration. like how the smudged out lipstick seems to distord her face and gives her a wry smile. excellent toning, great detail, outstanding photo

Johann

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25 Oct 2006 - 2:08 PM

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This image is very dramatic, starting for the cropping, I am not sure if I would crop so close to the eyebrow, great textures and contrast, I love that you included the leaves, and you made the makeup look like the leaves. I don't think you need to improve this image, I would buy this image

clevercloggs (e2 Member)

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25 Oct 2006 - 3:31 PM

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I agree with the above that we are looking at a striking and well composed image.
Just wonder why the lh bottom corner is blurred. I would have expected a blurred leaf there resting on the body to creat depth. Just a minor niggle.

Westers

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25 Oct 2006 - 4:27 PM

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Maybe a slightly stronger catch light in the left eye (as you look at it)?

Brought Johnny Cash's version of NIN's "Hurt" to mind when looking at this.

clintnewsham (e2 Member)

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26 Oct 2006 - 12:29 AM

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not much critique needed in this shot, it works just fine.
agree with Westers about the catchlight and i would remove the dots on the shoulder but other than that it works just fine.
got a colour vrsion.

Clint