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Clown Inspired reject photo.
Self.

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:18-55mm
Title:Made Up
Username:victoriasims victoriasims
Uploaded:25 Oct 2006 - 1:27 PM
Tags:Black & white, Portraits / people
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sorry, no critique from me, just admiration. like how the smudged out lipstick seems to distord her face and gives her a wry smile. excellent toning, great detail, outstanding photo

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ljesmith
ljesmith  101092 forum posts United Kingdom
25 Oct 2006 - 1:51 PM

Did you mean this to go up for critique? There's no suggestion I can make to improve this.

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Johann
Johann  10 Canada
25 Oct 2006 - 2:08 PM

This image is very dramatic, starting for the cropping, I am not sure if I would crop so close to the eyebrow, great textures and contrast, I love that you included the leaves, and you made the makeup look like the leaves. I don't think you need to improve this image, I would buy this image Smile

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Philip Mc
Philip Mc  12
25 Oct 2006 - 3:30 PM

Excellent stuff, if a little contrived. You don't need to improve this image.
Philip

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clevercloggs
25 Oct 2006 - 3:31 PM

I agree with the above that we are looking at a striking and well composed image.
Just wonder why the lh bottom corner is blurred. I would have expected a blurred leaf there resting on the body to creat depth. Just a minor niggle.

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paulcr  101536 forum posts Ireland9 Constructive Critique Points
25 Oct 2006 - 3:34 PM

Well I couldn't improve it..! Paul

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Westers
Westers  103905 forum posts Burkina Faso1 Constructive Critique Points
25 Oct 2006 - 4:27 PM

Maybe a slightly stronger catch light in the left eye (as you look at it)?

Brought Johnny Cash's version of NIN's "Hurt" to mind when looking at this.

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POOCHIE e2 Member 8POOCHIE vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
25 Oct 2006 - 6:39 PM

Such a strong image and the balance of the picture is really nice with the leaves forming a dark area to mirror the dark top left area, just a wonderfully planned and executed shot.

pooch.

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clintnewsham
clintnewsham e2 Member 10104 forum postsclintnewsham vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2006 - 12:29 AM

not much critique needed in this shot, it works just fine.
agree with Westers about the catchlight and i would remove the dots on the shoulder but other than that it works just fine.
got a colour vrsion.

Clint

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User_Removed
4 Jul 2007 - 8:42 AM

nothing here.
beautiful

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