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Photo taken of a silk flower indoors
No photoshop was used
I was trying to create a dream like flower.

Critique welcome.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 500D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.8 II
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:6 Dec 2010 - 11:21 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.8
Aperture:f/1.8
Shutter Speed:1/50sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:250
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Blue Rose
Username:Vitatana Vitatana
Uploaded:9 May 2012 - 7:00 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants, Wildlife / nature
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2781 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2012 - 7:21 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi from Toronto.


I like the idea, - lens wide open with nothing sharp, - like the colours, like the softness. The placement of the main flower leave the shot unbalanced for me, and it may suit a square crop better. I would remove those brown stems too just to leave it softer in the background.

Although youve gone for soft, its not a bad idea to have a very small amount of the flower sharp, which Ive done in the mod. I also applied some diffuse glow to soften a little more, and applied a simple frame. Hope you like the idea.




regards


Willie

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Vitatana
Vitatana  2 Canada
9 May 2012 - 7:52 PM

Hey Willie, I love your mod! Thanks for the critique!

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