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18 Apr 2011 - 2:19 PM

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JackAllTog (e2 Member)

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18 Apr 2011 - 2:19 PM

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Lovely and expressive.

As far as critique goes, its a tad soft and the foot is cut off. As you say the background clutters.
If you had stood up higher over her and more to the right you might have got her foot as well as less background.

But she does look a bit sorrowfull and alone, for a happier cuter shot you might get in closer to mostly get just her face then make her smile with a sweet or something to make her laugh. then you might have a picture that her parents can display on their wall.

But its still a lovely engaging shot just as it is.

banehawi (Critique Team)

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19 Apr 2011 - 2:48 PM

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The child has incredible eyes Wajid, - I can see why you took this shot.

The fact the child is looking up in that manner is very endearing, and though I would normally suggest you dont shoot from a levele higher than the face, its worked for you here.

As mentioned, a little soft, a little flat due to low contrast, and I would also suggest lifting the shadows in the eyes. The fact one foot is missing from the frame looks like an error, but you can make this appear deliberate by cropping space from the bottom as in the mod. Sharpened, cropped, increased contrast, lifted eye shadows and painted in small catch lights.


Hope this is helpful,


regards


Willie

Suehh (e2 Member)

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5 May 2011 - 4:36 PM

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Hello Wajid - such a beautiful child. Personally, I really like the way she is looking up at you with those beautiful eyes. I don't think it matters that she is not smiling as you captured that moment and in that moment she was not smiling. Willie's mod is wonderful to me and the increased contrast, etc., makes such a difference. A very nice capture Wajid - perhaps you can do more of this type of photography. Regards - Susan