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I went to relative house . there i saw this baby her name is MAhnur and i take the photo.. I made a little bit corp, back ground was not good thatswhy..

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Title:cute baby / MAH NUR
Username:wajid wajid
Uploaded:18 Apr 2011 - 12:23 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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ccb
ccb  626 forum posts United States2 Constructive Critique Points
18 Apr 2011 - 1:14 PM

Beautiful child and so well photographed, Wajid!
Christina

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JackAllTog
JackAllTog e2 Member 53544 forum postsJackAllTog vcard United Kingdom58 Constructive Critique Points
18 Apr 2011 - 2:19 PM

Lovely and expressive.

As far as critique goes, its a tad soft and the foot is cut off. As you say the background clutters.
If you had stood up higher over her and more to the right you might have got her foot as well as less background.

But she does look a bit sorrowfull and alone, for a happier cuter shot you might get in closer to mostly get just her face then make her smile with a sweet or something to make her laugh. then you might have a picture that her parents can display on their wall.

But its still a lovely engaging shot just as it is.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
18 Apr 2011 - 6:09 PM

Pleasant image but you give us no details. I is a bit soft in sharness and contrast. Just needs a bit of sharpening and a contrast boost - I would also crop a bit closer - up to the hand.

Paul

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banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2801 Constructive Critique Points
19 Apr 2011 - 2:48 PM

The child has incredible eyes Wajid, - I can see why you took this shot.

The fact the child is looking up in that manner is very endearing, and though I would normally suggest you dont shoot from a levele higher than the face, its worked for you here.

As mentioned, a little soft, a little flat due to low contrast, and I would also suggest lifting the shadows in the eyes. The fact one foot is missing from the frame looks like an error, but you can make this appear deliberate by cropping space from the bottom as in the mod. Sharpened, cropped, increased contrast, lifted eye shadows and painted in small catch lights.


Hope this is helpful,


regards


Willie

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Chinga
Chinga e2 Member 3Chinga vcard United Kingdom
21 Apr 2011 - 11:08 AM

You photo of the child is very endearing and very candid. Beautiful subject. Can't help with the technical side of it as I am not very experiencied, but it's a lovely image.
Isabel = Chinga

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Suehh e2 Member 739 forum postsSuehh vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
5 May 2011 - 4:36 PM

Hello Wajid - such a beautiful child. Personally, I really like the way she is looking up at you with those beautiful eyes. I don't think it matters that she is not smiling as you captured that moment and in that moment she was not smiling. Willie's mod is wonderful to me and the increased contrast, etc., makes such a difference. A very nice capture Wajid - perhaps you can do more of this type of photography. Regards - Susan

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PaulLiley
PaulLiley  5 United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2011 - 10:13 PM

Like the pose and the longing look in the eyes. Just the foot off the frame otherwise. nice composition. Paul

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