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first in a series of 3

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-GH3
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Aug 2013 - 7:13 AM
Focal Length:48mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.5
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/3200sec
Exposure Comp:-0.33
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:a day at the seaside 7
Username:whatriveristhis whatriveristhis
Uploaded:26 Aug 2013 - 12:09 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Portraits / people
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Nikonuser1
Nikonuser1 e2 Member 2Nikonuser1 vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 12:16 AM

Excellent mono Alan, like the way you have used the tyres to lead the eye to the peopleSmile


Cliff

richmowil
richmowil e2 Member 5241 forum postsrichmowil vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 12:22 AM

Excellent Image!!

Potra
Potra e2 Member 1Potra vcard Venezuela
26 Aug 2013 - 1:06 AM

I absolutely love the silver horizon you always get! The figures are always well placed.
Lovely composition.
M

mlseawell
mlseawell e2 Member 4mlseawell vcard United Kingdom
26 Aug 2013 - 6:24 AM

Love the bands, the framing and the fam on the beach as the end of summer approaches.

Mark

Michaela_Solway
Michaela_Solway e2 Member 3Michaela_Solway vcard
26 Aug 2013 - 8:04 AM

Super composition. Like the layers, tones lead in & the placement of the silhouetted figures. Excellent

whatriveristhis
whatriveristhis e2 Member 163 forum postswhatriveristhis vcard England70 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:15 AM

Thanks everybody.
And Marian... xx

woolybill1
woolybill1 e2 Member 7woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom65 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:23 AM

Beautifully composed, juxtaposing the delightful family group against the silver sea with the discarded tyre and air of general desolation in the foreground. Strong stuff.
I agree with Cliff about the lead-in; except that my eye was instinctively drawn to the light area first before retreating to the dead tyre.
Regards
Bill

widtink
widtink  2406 forum posts Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:29 AM

Sparkly sea , silouhetted figures , a dug and and abandoned tyre......................what's not to love about this one Alan SmileSmile Composed beautifully.

Rod

whatriveristhis
whatriveristhis e2 Member 163 forum postswhatriveristhis vcard England70 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:32 AM


Quote: I agree with Cliff about the lead-in; except that my eye was instinctively drawn to the light area first before retreating to the dead tyre.

Yes, I quite liked the effect of that. Which is just as well, as I couldn't find a way round it GrinGrin

Cheers, Bill.

WhiteRose1
WhiteRose1 e2 Member 41031 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England134 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:34 AM

Like the composition, Alan, with everything of interest squished on the edges.

Dave

mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7404 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom986 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:37 AM

County Durham beaches are like nowhere else on earth...
The tyres create a lead-in but it's a nicely rambling, lazy one.
I could have fun with moving that foreground tyre to the right and then cropping to portrait. But that would be a very different picture.
Moira

whatriveristhis
whatriveristhis e2 Member 163 forum postswhatriveristhis vcard England70 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:43 AM


Quote: I could have fun with moving that foreground tyre to the right and then cropping to portrait. But that would be a very different picture.

...and it wouldn't, dear Moira my Best Girl, be mine. Grin

Alan

marktc
marktc e2 Member 346 forum postsmarktc vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:46 AM

Morning old chap... The layers make the image, both in terms of light and content. Like Bill, my eye is drawn instinctively to the light, picking up the family and then being lead top to bottom of the image anding in the tyre. This has created a story of changing emotions too, from the joyful family outing to the "discarded tyre and air of general desolation in the foreground" as Bill described it.

Not by any means a simple composition, either in technical or emotional terms. Told you I was in a dark mood! The wife has the earplugs!!!

mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7404 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom986 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:47 AM


Quote: ...and it wouldn't, dear Moira my Best Girl, be mine.

Precisely.

NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 33045 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom101 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:50 AM

Stunning composition with both depth and interest Kurt.

Nathan

whatriveristhis
whatriveristhis e2 Member 163 forum postswhatriveristhis vcard England70 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2013 - 8:55 AM


Quote: Stunning composition with both depth and interest Kurt.

Nathan

Nathan, or rather, George, who the hell is Kurt???

lblythe
lblythe e2 Member 1lblythe vcard United Kingdom
26 Aug 2013 - 5:12 PM

Interesting, subtle variety of images from the one location. I'm assuming it's the same beach. The figures are intriguing, look like aliens.
L

Nigeve1
Nigeve1 e2 Member 1680 forum postsNigeve1 vcard United Kingdom75 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 7:51 AM

It has all been said above, Alan. composition is great, leads eye bottom left, mid right and to the people.
Nigel

annettep38
annettep38 e2 Member 3186 forum postsannettep38 vcard France30 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2013 - 9:29 AM

I like the silhouettes and the composition. The tyre appeals very much to me, that is my personal occupational meantal illness Smile.

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