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This is a detail of the roof of the Sage.

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-GH3
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:18 Feb 2014 - 12:05 PM
Focal Length:22mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.5
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:-0.33
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:curve
Username:whatriveristhis whatriveristhis
Uploaded:24 Feb 2014 - 11:59 PM
Tags:Architecture, Black & white
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Votes:47

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peekay2001
peekay2001 e2 Member 2peekay2001 vcard India9 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 12:14 AM

harmonious.. as much parallel to the borders as possible.. again very fine elements, and fine composition.. a work of poetry and music..

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43684 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom107 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 12:49 AM

Beautiful engineering wonderful photography.

Regards Nathan SadSadSad

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 431 forum postsIrishkate vcard United Kingdom76 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 1:07 AM

So that's how curves should be done.
Quite beautiful Alan.
Kate GrinGrinGrin

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Mollycat
Mollycat e2 Member 1Mollycat vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 2:01 AM

Like the artistry in this Alan.

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104253 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 6:45 AM

strong lines Smile

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Nigeve1
Nigeve1 e2 Member 1920 forum postsNigeve1 vcard United Kingdom95 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 6:54 AM

Beautifully observed abstraction from this superb architecture and very effective use of light.
Nigel

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fazzer
fazzer e2 Member 543 forum postsfazzer vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 7:03 AM

Excellent toning and the comp works really well
Regards

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marktc
marktc e2 Member 459 forum postsmarktc vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 7:44 AM

Sweet.... Now you're talking! Magnificent composition, great tonal range and another very pleasing mix of sinuous curves and straight lines... Top shot, you should do more of these Alan!

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Nikonuser1
Nikonuser1 e2 Member 2Nikonuser1 vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 8:10 AM

Great mix of curves and lines Alan, excellent imageSmile


Cliff

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woolybill1
woolybill1 e2 Member 8woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom65 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 8:58 AM

An angle of the Sage that I can't quite place (ergo: excuse for another visit Smile)
Excellent composition, exquisite monochrome and even some blue sky. If you see what I mean!
Love PK's comment.
Regards
Bill

Last Modified By woolybill1 at 25 Feb 2014 - 9:00 AM

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 8529 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1094 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 9:09 AM

Where the hell were you for this??? Not sure about the dark red wedge at the bottom, otherwise brilliant! Angles perfectly contained.
Moira

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PhilT2
PhilT2 e2 Member 4104 forum postsPhilT2 vcard England14 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 9:11 AM

You could almost calibrate your screen from this...........Unusual and brilliant

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jadus
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25 Feb 2014 - 9:22 AM

Like it Alan!
Jade

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MalcolmM
MalcolmM e2 Member 991 forum postsMalcolmM vcard Scotland4 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 9:25 AM

Love the lines & curves here.
Very minor point, nitpicking maybe, - roof corner lower right - a trifle more space to see the corner?
Excellent mono.

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WhiteRose1
WhiteRose1 e2 Member 41122 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England137 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 9:49 AM

Makes an excellent grey scale card, Alan Grin. The 'ladder' curve is most prominent but those roof 'spider legs' look so good. And the border is very empathic.

Dave

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Joline
Joline e2 Member 8Joline vcard United States52 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 1:01 PM

A masterwork of architecture. You have found the right angle to show it off well.

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Scottishlandscapes
Scottishlandscapes e2 Member 1068 forum postsScottishlandscapes vcard Scotland35 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 1:31 PM

Curves arcs and good light.

Dougie

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whatriveristhis
whatriveristhis e2 Member 167 forum postswhatriveristhis vcard England79 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 2:03 PM


Quote: Very minor point, nitpicking maybe, - roof corner lower right - a trifle more space to see the corner?

Thanks, Malcolm.
Personally I think that corner should touch the frame, it closes the image. That's how I see it anyway Smile

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AnnChown
AnnChown e2 Member 5192 forum postsAnnChown vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2014 - 10:13 PM

Cleverly composed Alan, I especially like the cloud.

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lblythe
lblythe e2 Member 1lblythe vcard United Kingdom
26 Feb 2014 - 6:22 PM

Your black and white shots are always excellent.
L

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derekhansen
derekhansen e2 Member 6200 forum postsderekhansen vcard United Kingdom24 Constructive Critique Points
26 Feb 2014 - 7:40 PM

Tonally very good and very well composed Alan.
Derek

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Potra
Potra e2 Member 1Potra vcard Venezuela
6 Mar 2014 - 2:55 AM

Splendid framing of this most amazing structure.
I would love to see it in person!
M

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