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I like the contrast between the tree and sky and the almost neural pattern of the smaller branches.

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix FZ48
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 May 2012 - 11:30 AM
Focal Length:4.5mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/5.0
Shutter Speed:1/1600sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Wood and Sky
Username:widtink widtink
Uploaded:11 Nov 2012 - 3:03 PM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10875 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2874 Constructive Critique Points
11 Nov 2012 - 8:30 PM

The brains of the Earth. I like it too, - theres some very nice detail in the small branches.

I would darken the top left, - theres a lot of noise there anyway, so darkening covers it, and also prevents the eye from being attracted to the lighter green; Theres a couple of lens flares that you can remove if you want, - theyre not bad, - I did remove them in the mod.


Hope the mod works for you


regards


Willie

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widtink
widtink  2406 forum posts Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2012 - 12:47 AM

sure does i thought i had darkened oot the green Sad

thanks

Rod

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8773 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1604 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2012 - 3:12 PM

The branches are like veins, Roddy, it's a fine abstract style image, with the tree in silhouette against the sky.
I quite like that touch of green top left, and so have left it there in my modification.
There are quite a few branches affected by glare, and another patch of it top right, which I cloned out. I simply went over the parts of grey branches with a black paint brush, then slightly adjusted levels to brighten the whole image. I also cropped, maintaining your aspect ratio, removing some of the heavier branches, as my eye was continually pulled to the top left.
Pamela.

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Tibetan
Tibetan  2 England
12 Nov 2012 - 3:21 PM

Like yer tree m8. blobs and all lol. tree of life init, the branches do look like veins as Pamela says, that bit of green goes nicely, best of luck Rod, have a good day raining here and flipping freezing, still your used to it up there, regards Leon.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

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widtink  2406 forum posts Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2012 - 5:15 PM

Cheers Pamela and Leon for the mod/comments veins or neurones its all life so thats cool. Indeed we are used to crap weather up here but still gonna light the fire tonite Wink Slainte Leon

Rod

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom855 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2012 - 8:02 PM

Simple but a strong attractive shape. No subject but OK in this case. Do wish modern compacts had smaller apertures. My Canon bridge camera stops at f8.

Paul

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widtink  2406 forum posts Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2012 - 8:14 PM

Aye thats true ive bought a Nikon D7000 so alls good this was an older shot i liked so posted it up the lumix is same f8

Rod

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