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Set set cruise, Calis beach Turkey















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Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S5700
Lens:Fixed Standard
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:24 Aug 2011 - 11:05 AM
Focal Length:6.3mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:64
Exposure Mode:Portrait
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Calis sunset
Username:willy03 willy03
Uploaded:1 Oct 2012 - 4:16 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Sunset sea
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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61587 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
1 Oct 2012 - 10:51 PM

hi, nice tones in the sky and particularly nice detail in the recession of the mountain range on the horizon.

its rather pleasant but there is an awful lot of sea making up a foreground that is doing not very much and has no detail on which to anchor the eye and the sun is a bit central.

id have been tempted to use a longer lens and go for the horizon and a huge sunball

Regards
Phil

Last Modified By NEWMANP at 1 Oct 2012 - 10:53 PM

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willy03
willy03  6 United Kingdom
1 Oct 2012 - 11:08 PM

Thanks for the comments phil. I used my fuji s5700 fixed lense camera for this one. I was on a boat and this was my old camera. Wasnt really sure what i was doing here but thought i would share it. I will defo take your comments into consideration while im out and about with my new nikon.

Thanks

Billy

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10876 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2876 Constructive Critique Points
2 Oct 2012 - 1:44 PM

Nice job considering your circumstances. Ive uploaded a mod with some of the suggestions Phil mentioned.


Regards


Willie

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willy03
willy03  6 United Kingdom
2 Oct 2012 - 8:44 PM

Wow i see now. I absolutely love the modification!! Thank you very much for that, And for your comment. Love the way how it looks so much different with the sun just not centre.

Thank you

Billy.

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