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Took this while at the park with my son. Was a quick shot and really windy so the bush kept moving. I thought was still nice Smile

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:5 Sep 2012 - 12:21 PM
Focal Length:55mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:220
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Tired
Username:willy03 willy03
Uploaded:4 Oct 2012 - 8:07 AM
Tags:Macro fly insect, Wildlife / nature
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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4211 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom129 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 11:12 AM

Good capture of bee and flower. Sharp and well focused with a nice out of focus background. The main point I would like to make is the on its side composition. Although the flower was sideways on I reckon (just my view) the the 90 deg shift in my mod improves the image.
regards, Ian

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willy03
willy03  5 United Kingdom
4 Oct 2012 - 11:45 AM

Thanks very much for the feedback and the modification. Im so please that your advise was to rotate, as soon as i had uploaded i wish i had of tried this so you reasured me i should have. I think the mod looks 100 percent better.

Ill make sure to try this next time.

Thanks

Billy

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 4:11 PM

Not a bee, a Hoverfly. One of dozens of varieties. Decent effort with a kit lens but, ideally, you need to be rather closer and the images needs to be a lot sharper. Close up is not easy, particularly of small insects and really needs quite specialist gear. As said, you have not done too bad.

Paul

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