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dear team of Photoezine,pls critique the lighting dan composititon,thkz
you forgot to tick the critique box when you have uploaded it, it is located above the image details section.
I am not of the critique team, but here is my opinion: It is an action shot as actors/dancers move about so I shall be understanding. It is pity you don't mention if this is rehersal or actual showtime.
Lighting is good, point of view is good too. But it seems being shot in a rush. Framing is bad, from the top 3 far figures the middle one has a chopped head. The man on the right with the yellow fabric can be excluded, as distracting from the dancers, who don't seem been focused sharply. The picture could also look better as square, the right side with the praying man contains a socket also. The picture seem to be leaning to the right, the stage front that looks black is not even; if you had omitted this space you could have some space for the heads of the 3 actors at the background.
I am finished talking. Ug
dear PabloPhotographer,thkz so much for your very technical qritique,it is a very uselfull for me, i agree that this shoot is taking in hurry,composition needed to correct,since some negative space and beheaded back ground.Thkz
You are welcome Iskandar
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