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pls critique regarding the composition and story of this photo,thkz

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D MkII
Lens:24-105
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:12 May 2012 - 7:21 AM
Focal Length:65mm
Shutter Speed:1/30sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:with beloved grand ma
Username:WimpyIskandar WimpyIskandar
Uploaded:21 Feb 2013 - 1:38 AM
Tags:Black & white, General
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paskinmj
paskinmj  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Feb 2013 - 4:15 AM

Nice candid.
Matt

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WimpyIskandar
WimpyIskandar e2 Member 4WimpyIskandar vcard Indonesia
21 Feb 2013 - 4:27 AM

Matt,thkz.

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senn
senn e2 Member 3senn vcard Belgium1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Feb 2013 - 9:37 AM

fabulous image !.. well captured and rendered

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AnneWorner
AnneWorner e2 Member 6602 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States41 Constructive Critique Points
21 Feb 2013 - 1:59 PM

I like the mood captured here - the grandmother busy with her work and the little boy trying to make the best of it - slouched in his chair.

Slight improvements might involve rotating the image so the architectural lines are straight, maybe a slight crop on the left and lifting the dark areas a tad.

Anne

Last Modified By AnneWorner at 21 Feb 2013 - 1:59 PM

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WimpyIskandar
WimpyIskandar e2 Member 4WimpyIskandar vcard Indonesia
22 Feb 2013 - 1:32 AM

dear Atworner,
Thkz for deep technical aspeck declare,it very helpfull for me.
best regards

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