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This is my first post. I am very new to this whole thing and hope to post more in the near future. Picture is of my son Joshua on the first nice day after winter.

Camera:Pentax K10D Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:18-55mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:whats that
Username:xxxdrewxxx xxxdrewxxx
Uploaded:5 May 2007 - 1:21 PM
Tags:First post, Portraits / people
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pennyspike
pennyspike e2 Member 112068 forum postspennyspike vcard United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2007 - 10:26 PM

Lovely natural portrait of Joshua. You have a good range of tones and texture in his clothing and hair.
A slight change of angle from you to avoid the car would have improved this shot. A shallower depth of field would have isolated him more from the background. If you have the software this can still be done by making a very lose selection of Joshua with a big feather applied. ( 100 -200 onthe large file, less if you are working with a small file) Invert the selection and apply a degree of gaussian blur to taste.
Penny

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